Tuesday, 10/19/04
Take out your Essay #1 rough draft.
Warm Up. (group -- all copy into notebook)

1. * whole : fraction :: rigid : _________
2. * event : spectator :: __________ : doctor
3. * "again stand" = __________

RAGs for rough drafts

1. Do not use your name; use your 4-digit number.
2. If you get your own (or that of somebody you know), it doesn't matter. Read it anyway.
3. Read as far as you can in 1 minute. Don't dawdle, read as much as you can. When you hear, "Switch..."
4. Pass papers immediately. Always pass papers clockwise (to the left).
5. After reading the whole group of papers, come to an agreement about which paper of that group is the best. Write down that paper's number.

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Now what?

1. Get three people (at least one must be Mom/Dad) to read your first draft, and do Part I on the Evaluation Sheet.
2. Rewrite. Add, subtract, give details, give examples, proofread and fix! Do not just retype.
3. Show me 2nd draft and reader comments on Friday, 10/22.
4. After I see 2nd draft and comments, do your final draft and answer the rest of the questions on the evaluation sheet.
5. Evaluation Sheet + all drafts due: Wednesday, 10/27.