Tuesday, 3/17/09
Bonus: What famous mythical deed is associated with St. Patrick? What astounding feat did he initiate?
Warm Up. Click and Copy. Also copy the portion of each hint that is in quotes.
  1. The teacher _________(ed) a series of questions to the class. (From the Latin for "stop or rest.")  a) invoke  b) persist  c) suspend  d) pose  e) undergo
  2. Tom and Huck followed IJ around hoping to see him ________ his Master. (From the Latin for "voice.")  a) conceive  b) undergo  c) invoke  d) incline  e) forthcoming
  3. All human beings are _________(ally) valuable, whether they have money or not.  (From the Latin for "within.")  a) intrinsic  b) integrity  c) invoke  d) persist  e) incline
  4. Today's world is one which most of our ancestors could never ________ of. (From the Latin for "to take in.")  a) conceive  b) persist  c) invoke  d) albeit  e) compile
  5. Huck had no ___________(ation) to work. He was content to loaf around all day. (From the Latin for "to lean.")  a) conceive  b) incline  c) integrity  d) invoke  e) compile
  6. Mr. Coward ______(ed) the use of vocabulary cheat sheets for one month, and forced the students to actually learn the words. (From the Latin for "under hang.")  a) persist  b) undergo  c) invoke  d) conceive  e) suspend
Charlotte Mini Quiz (ch. 17)
  1. Charlotte thinks Zachariah's plan to go ashore in Providence and report Jaggery won't work, because Jaggery would never let him get ashore.  a) True  b) False
  2. What does Zachariah do to show Charlotte that any one of the crew was capable of killing Hollybrass?  a) He explains how they're all experts with a knife.  b) He tells her about the plan they had.  c) He tells her how the whole crew is made up of former criminals.  d) He tells her how gossip travels in a ship.  e) None of the above.
  3. At this point, whom does Charlotte think killed Hollybrass?  a) Dillingham  b) Keetch  c) Jaggery  d) the whole crew  e) none of the above
  4. When Jaggery comes to get Charlotte for her trial, she says he looks at her... a) with hatred.  b) with disgust.  c) with sick pleasure.  d) like she's not there.  e) all of the above.
  5. Jaggery tells Charlotte that she is only getting a trial because she's the daughter of one of the owners of the company.  a) True  b) False
Read-Around for Rough Drafts.
Before turning in, write the genre of your paper at the top.
  1. Read the paper and use at least one comment code from each side. Make sure to write the code next to the example of it. (Draw an arrow if you have to.)  If it is a comment on the paper as a whole, put it at the end. You may use the same code as a previous reader, but you must find another example.
  2. Also write a one sentence comment at the end of the paper. This comment may be either a kudo or a suggestion. No negative comments - just suggestions! BE SPECIFIC!!!! Number your comment.
  3. Pass on the paper to someone else.
  4. Each paper must be read 5 times. If you are the fifth person, bring the paper to me when you are finished. If the paper got a lot of kudos, let me know.
  5. If you think the paper is PERFECT, bring it unto me.
Essay Evaluation
 
Problems
  • I B C - intro, body, conclusion ? (Circle which it is.)
  • EEE - examples, examples, examples??? 
  • P - paragraphs (Show them where they go.)
  • M - mechanics other than spelling  (Fix a couple.)
  • Sp - spelling (Fix a couple.)
  • OI - organization issues
  • WTP - no thesis or  point (What's the point?)
  • MS - missing something  (Like what?)
Kudos
  • HAHA - funny
  • I - interesting
  • WW - well written
  • U - useful/learned something
  • D - descriptive/showy
  • EMO - emotional/moving
  • Wow - insightful/especially beauty
  • WO - well organized
Evaluation