I am fond
of many colors, but the color green has a particularly special significance
in my life. The color Kelly green comes immediately to mind because it
is associated with my ethnic and cultural heritage. My parents are
first-generation Irish Americans who immigrated to the United States as
children. Their homeland Ireland is commonly referred to as the Emerald
Isle, because it is so rich and lush in vegetation, due to the high rainfall.
Furthermore, the symbol for Ireland is a bright green shamrock, representing
good luck. The lucky shamrock, or four-leaf clover, can be seen throughout
the US decorating cards, restaurants, and clothing during the week of March
17, when Irish Americans and their friends celebrate Saint Patrick's Day,
the patron saint of Ireland.
Another equally important reason why I value the color green is that I associate it with my favorite hobby, walking and hiking in nature. Because I spend considerable time indoors doing homework, doing chores, and other family stuff, I look forward to enjoying some relaxing time outdoors every day. The majestic oak trees in my area always provide me with a peaceful environment to recharge my mind.
In conclusion, although I don't wear green very often, or even decorate my room with green things, it still is the most significant color in my personal life because it reminds me of my family, my heritage, and my appreciation for nature.
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